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書面表達附解析（2018 年中考英語試題分類匯編第三期）專題 13 書面表達1.初中三年即將過去，你在這三年中一定有沒有實現(xiàn)的愿望。為此，校園廣播站特向全校 初三學生征稿。請你根據下面提示，寫一篇廣播稿。1. 沒有實現(xiàn)的愿望(如: 學會吉他)；2. 沒有實現(xiàn)愿望的原因（至少兩個） ；3. 進入高中后為實現(xiàn)愿望的計劃。 要求：1．短文應條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明，90 詞左右。 （開頭己給出，不計入 總字數）2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、學校、地名等信息。3．短文應包括全部信息，可圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。How time flies! Three years of junior high school has gone by before we know it.【答案】How time flies! Three years of junior high school has gone by before we know it.Each time I look back on my school days, I feel regretful, because one of my wishes hasn’t been realized. That is to learn how to play the guitar.Although I am really interested in playing the instrument, I was busy working at my lessons. Besides, there was much homework to every day.The end of junior high school is the beginning of new life. If I can enter the senior high school, I will take part in after-school activities to learn to play the guitar. I believe I’ll live a colorful life in the senior high school.2.【2018 年浙江省金華】在即將舉行的中學生國際文化交流活動中，你將代表學校介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，請你從所給的卡片中任選一張，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹該節(jié)日。注意：①發(fā)言稿中必須包含卡片上的信息，并適當發(fā)揮；②文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學校等信息；③詞數80～100；④文章的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數?！敬鸢浮縇adies and gentlemen, Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival falls in January February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of year.So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year,hoping they will have a bright new start. During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year, Children can often get hongbao from their elders. Do you think it interesting?That’s all. Thanks for listening【高分句型一】Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start. 許多人熬夜迎接新年，希望他們有一個光明的開端。動詞不定式 to welcome the new year 用作目的狀語，分詞短語 hoping they will have a bright new start.用作伴隨狀語?！靖叻志湫投緾hildren can often get hongbao from their elders. 孩子們通常可以從長輩那里得到紅包。此句寫出了春節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習俗，也是孩子們最開心的事情之一。get sth. from 從……得到某物。3.【2018 年浙江省紹興中考】你校英語社團正在開展主題為“ How do students find study partners？”的討論，為此你采訪了一些學生，請你根據下表內容用英語寫一篇短文進行交流，并說明你自己的方式及理由。注意:（1）短文必須包括表中所有內容，可適當增加細節(jié)；（2）你的理由至少兩條；（3）詞數:80-100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數。參考詞匯:學伴 study partner 方便的 convenient短文首句: I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.【答案】I have recently＇done a survey about how students find study partners.Some students find study partners through the Internet. They believe it＇s convenient to find partners to study with online. Besides， they can get help from study partners whenever necessary. Some students Prefer to Join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face. What＇s more， they think working out problems together helps learn more easily.As for me， I＇d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun. Also， it＇s a good way to learn how to get on well with others.題目中已經給出；接下來我們來介紹兩種不同的方式以及理由；最后闡述自己的方式及理由。所以短文可以分成三段來敘述。時態(tài)應該是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱復數為主。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當的詞匯、句型和短語，寫完整的句子。句式結構以主謂賓和主系表為主，輔以并列句和復合句以及其他復雜句式，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文章意思連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息。短文共分成三部分，第一部分是題目中給出的一句概括的句子，點明了文章的主題。第二部分中作者介紹了不同學生們尋找學伴的不同方式以及他們的理由；最后作者介紹了自己的方式及理由。分段敘述，使文章結構清晰，有條理。其次短文使用了恰當的英語表達方式，句式符合英語的表達習慣，語言地道、得體。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，第二段使用了第三人稱敘述，最后一段使用第一人稱，語法規(guī)范、準確。最后短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如 They believe it＇s convenient to find partners to study with online 中使用了賓語從句，和非謂語動詞作主語的句型；再如 Some students Prefer to Join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face 中使用了目的狀語從句；再如 I＇d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun.中原因狀語從句等等。同時文章中使用了恰當的連接成分，如 Besides, What’s more, As for me, Also等等，使文章意思連貫、表達流暢。 4.【2018 年甘肅省白銀】書面表達“讀萬卷書，行萬里路” ，旅行是學習的最好方式之一。請以“Travelling ”為題，根據以下思維導圖的提示，寫一篇短文，發(fā)表你的看法。注意：1．要點齊全，適當發(fā)揮；2．從思維導圖 Saying 部分選擇恰當的格言合理利用在短文中；3．句子及篇章結構準確、連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4．詞數：80-100 詞左右；5．文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名、學校及其它任何個人相關信息。 【答案】TravellingTravelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. Furthermore, if you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology and history of the places you visit. While travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.5.【2018 年河北省中考】請仔細觀察下面的圖片，并根據所給提示和要求寫一篇短文。提示：（1）What are the man and the woman doing?（2）What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?要求：（1）短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮。（2）短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。（3）詞數 80 個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數） 。參考詞匯：throw, environment, civilized(文明的I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing his rubbish in the public place.The other woman is stopping him and telling him to put it into the dustbin.The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter like this, we should act like the woman.The environment should be protected by everybody.We should be civilized citizens.點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。6.【2018 年湖北省黃岡市中考】美麗中國,美麗長江。黃岡是長江邊一座美麗的城市。假如你是黃岡某中學的一名中學生李明,請你以“美麗的黃岡”為話題,向你的英國筆友 Tom 介紹一下你美麗的家鄉(xiāng)——黃岡。要點提示：1.黃岡位于長江之邊,大別山之南；2.黃岡歷史悠久,名人輩出；3.黃岡風景迷人,鄉(xiāng)村秀美;4.人人參與,從小事做起,黃岡人正在努力地保護黃岡的自然環(huán)境;5.邀請 Tom 來中國,欣賞黃岡更美好的綠水青山、藍天白云。寫作要求：1.詞數 90 左右(短文的開頭已經給出 ,不計入總詞數);2.根據要點提示,可以適當發(fā)揮;3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名及校名。參考詞匯:lie(位于); Dabie mountains; plant; clean up; clear river and green mountains Dear Tom,Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown, now let me tell you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours, Li Ming【答案】Dear Tom,Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown. now let me tell you.My hometown is Huanggang. It lies by the Yangtze River and at the southern foot of Dabie Mountains.It's a beautiful city with a long history. A number of famous people come from our city, such as Li siguang, Li shizhen, Wen Yiduo and so on. There are lots of beautiful mountains, rivers and lakes. They are so fascinating that thousands of tourists come to visit Huanggang every year. You can also see beautiful villages everywhere. We are proud of our hometown.Now the people in Huanggang are trying to protect the natural environment. We plant trees as many as possible every year. We stop factories from throwing rubbish into the rivers. Volunteers go to the mountains, forests, parks and streets to clean them up on the weekends. Everyone is playing a role in making our city more and more beautiful. We are taking action!Tom, would you like to come to Huanggang? You can see clear rivers and green mountains as well as blue skies and white cloud. I believe you will fall in love with our city and have a wonderful time. Looking forward to your visit!Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了黃岡的地理位置，接下來介紹黃岡的歷史、風景和環(huán)保情況，最后邀請 Tom 來中國,欣賞黃岡更美好的綠水青山、藍天白云。此處 ask sb about sth, a number of, be proud of, as…as possible, play a role in doing sth, fall in love with, have a wonderful time 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。7.【2018 年湖北省宜昌中考】為了更好地開展八年級學生的研學旅行( study travel)，學?，F(xiàn)面向全年級征集活動意向。假如你是李華，請談談你建議的時間和地點并陳述理由，簡要介紹打算開展的活動。要求：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；（2）詞數 80 左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。Dear leaders,I am Li Hua from Class, Grade 8. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________We can discuss the details(細節(jié))later.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear leaders,I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 8. Here is my advice about our study travel.I suggest going to Wufeng Houhe Forest Park. It is a beautiful park with green water and mountains. There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals. We can get closer to the nature. I think June is the best time to get there. Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.We will have lots of activities, such as climbing the mountains and studying about plants. I'm sure the travel will be both pleasant and educationalWe can discuss the details(細節(jié)) later.YoursLi Hua